All Comments on 'Mom's Family Villa Pt. 02'

Please please do not portray the son as a 12 year old. so many authors do that and it is not cute. It is weird and uncomfortable reading when the son sound so young.

This is looking like another medicine or monster story; same basic setup and characters. With these short chapters that make the story disconjointed and hard to read. I don't know what's happened to this Author but the quality has suffered greatly.

no 14" cock this time? Why is he so pathetic?

Too short

Too short and the ending felt incomplete. Three stars.

This reminds me of The Monster where it's really short each chapter and lots of teasing

The guy sounds like a 12 year old.