All Comments on 'Moms Need Anal Assistance'

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FeltfixerFeltfixerabout 1 year ago

5 Stars for for originality.

You could continue this, there’s life in it.

AZslyderAZslyderabout 1 year ago
warning label

You really need a warning label for shit play, this is gross. 1* Don't ambush your readers, it's completely rude.

sp9983sp9983about 1 year ago

A dumb premis. They should have just had a threesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Seriously stupid and funny

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

As clever and imaginative as I've ever read. And the writing was good too. ;)

yourkinkylibrarianyourkinkylibrarianabout 1 year ago

Vaseline / condom. This family is the worst!

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsabout 1 year ago

I thought seriously FUNNY!! A Monty Python skit would be hilarious!! And while the whole thing was ridiculous, anal sex is always kinda hot!!! I'll go 5- stars for the originality!!

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601about 1 year ago

At first, I laughed at the inherent comedy here. But, not being a scat guy, I soon lost interest.

I appreciate the attempt at comedy but jokes only exist in the absurd not in the real. If someone has to clean up the shit it’s no longer funny.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
I like it

Very good. Keep writing those stories. Same theme. Anal is great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another episode required!

PirxPilotPirxPilot12 months ago

Lolol. The hilarity of a fecal transplant being used as a plot device for an erotic story is amazing. First time I have EVER enjoyed a scat story.

HeartstringsHeartstrings12 months agoAuthor

Thanks all for the range of feedback. Point noted @azslyder et al. I like these characters. I think they might be reunited in another story in a more savoury scene.

DougsLairDougsLair11 months ago

5 stars. Excellent story, loved it

WidowernHornyWidowernHorny11 months ago

Brilliant story...great writing....loved it

AardieAardie10 months ago

Of course he had to fuck his Mom's ass, because a dildo wouldn't have worked.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

ok if implausible

DatyboyDatyboy6 months ago

Wow! This is the hottest, most demented story I’ve read in a long while. Thank you and keep it up!

GrandEagle53GrandEagle534 months ago

Just silly......BUT OH SO EROTIC!!!! 5 huge stars

TrilloTrillo3 months ago

Funny Crazy stupid! But kinky hot !

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