by Heartstrings
You really need a warning label for shit play, this is gross. 1* Don't ambush your readers, it's completely rude.
As clever and imaginative as I've ever read. And the writing was good too. ;)
I thought seriously FUNNY!! A Monty Python skit would be hilarious!! And while the whole thing was ridiculous, anal sex is always kinda hot!!! I'll go 5- stars for the originality!!
At first, I laughed at the inherent comedy here. But, not being a scat guy, I soon lost interest.
I appreciate the attempt at comedy but jokes only exist in the absurd not in the real. If someone has to clean up the shit it’s no longer funny.
Lolol. The hilarity of a fecal transplant being used as a plot device for an erotic story is amazing. First time I have EVER enjoyed a scat story.
Thanks all for the range of feedback. Point noted @azslyder et al. I like these characters. I think they might be reunited in another story in a more savoury scene.
Wow! This is the hottest, most demented story I’ve read in a long while. Thank you and keep it up!