All Comments on 'Mom's Sexy Lingerie'

Wow! Very hot! Love the stockings! Please continue.

A good storyline but so rushed.

I wish she shit in his mouth

Nice, she knows now that her son loves her and they will make love every day, he will cum inside her hot, fertile pussy and make her pregnant.

Really hot !! she should have said that she wants more babies!

I might have read this, if not for the pee tag. Thanks for being honest up front.

Twenty years anniversary and her son just turned twenty last week . . . Guess her son was born before the wedding . . .

A few quotes include:

"The touch of her labia on his sons face" whose face?

"Her mouth moans louder"- a mouth doesn't moan, although it might emit a moan

"They both cum in a frenzy orgasm" - perhaps they both cum in frenzied orgasms?

The story is better than good, and could be fantastic. Proof Reading is required AND in your case, editing. All the parameters are there except grammer and the rules that justify grammer.

Please, locate resources as required AND continue writing. Your mind is a fertile place from which will, in all likelihood, come great porn.

Damn! My head hurt trying to read this. PROOF READ before you post your stories. You want your readers to enjoy them not decipher them.

Completely awful

I found the need to pee in his mouth such a horny concept.

excellent shoulf be little bit slow..peeinv in his son mouth best.

This was absolutely CUM-producing! WOW, FUCKING WOW!!!

Other than a couple of minor errors, one of the hottest, sexiest, dirtiest, most wonderful stories I could dream. There need to be more chapters here.