All Comments on 'Mom's Three Weeks Off Pt. 02'

Great story Thank you

Fabulous story. Really well written.

Lovely mother

Good story man can't wait to see part 3 with Deborah pregnant.

your writing style is very descriptive; the sex, love, is never yada yada yada'd. it's easy to become immersed in their love for each other. As you may know, your 2nd part just blew past the many 4.86 rated stories to earn a 4.88!! Kudos and well deserved!

i was wrong! It's a 4.74. Not sure where i got the 4.88. Anyway... thanks for writing. i suppose i'll have to tackle your GOAT series at some point

Great great great. I love the elaborate descriptions that remain interesting due to the love between the characters. So immersive!

I'm loving the story so far, it really makes you feel like you're in the room with the characters. Can't wait for part 3

This guy knows how to write. Another 5 star effort.

What will happen next? I don't know but one can hope for a juicy doggy style sometime in their future dear Thomas_LM_Windsor :-)

I love it but not sure where else you can go with it to the point it starts becoming redundant. I am not into the whole pregnancy fetish but that seems like your only option if you do a part 3.

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Great incest story. Well written and extremely hot and ecplicit.

It has so many options to continue it with the existing characyers or bringing new ones.

Thanks for sharing.

Excellent Story!! Since they've confirmed how much they enjoy each other, now they can just fuck. Swearing as they cum with Deborah being very vocal.

Waiting for part 3 and mom getting pregnant!

Great story. Can not wait for the next part. Just do not break hearts and it will be another great story. It sounds like there may be something between the two moms. Chelsea’s son does not seem to be handling the hole daddy thing well. There could be a great spin off there. Maybe Jason’s friend leaves and Chelsea comes over for comforting and starts something there. Still. An not wait for the next story.

Really enjoyed it!

Absolutely brilliant read erotic scenarios loved it can't wait to read more

Absolutely loved it, need part 3 ASAP

more, love it. knock her up!!!!!!

Very hot! Looking forward to the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story. She just has to get pregnant

Woooooowww, wowwww, wowwww ... such a hot and tender, loving mother/son-story ... I enjoyed it … loved your built up … You are a fantastic writer and I am happy that I found you on here!! This is a good one! Really, really good writing. Descriptive, detailed, showing us the relationship instead of just telling us. THANK YOU! Looking forward for your next loving mom/son-stories.

Five stars isn’t enough!

Very nicely written! Enjoyed the build up as much as the actual act itself. Potentially very very interesting BFF. Love the pastor’s wife angle. 👍

Your writing keeps me so intrigued that I just have to continue as I get more horny, hot and wet ...can't wait for part 3 🤗 😘 😝

"I don't want to betray my son by letting my husband fuck me." It sounds so funny, yet it sounds so right. :) Chelsea knows what really matters. Can't say I'm surprised the husband would be fucking around if he's not had sex with her for years. Not sure why though as she sounds hot and a good person at heart.

The constant little admonishments to mind his language is very annoying. Like really? You're fucking blowing your son and you care he swore? Priorities! Also I feel like there's too many fucking blowjobs. Get to the sex already!

OK so we finally get to the sex but then it's like, "no no no, why!?" The condom fucking ruined it, which is a shame after all that build up. What a waste especially for their first time. First time should always be raw for maximum pleasure and intimacy. Didn't she remember what her friend said at that moment? How did she forget so easily. Lame. At that point I felt most of my enthusiasm for the story drain from me. I mean it can be somewhat salvaged in part 3 I guess, but it won't be the same.

Oh Good, there's more...

I love this story please keep writing

Please tell us Deborah shaves her pussy completely bald for the next chapter. Would be so hot.

Started great then it was hard to read. Way too many typos and bad grammar. Proofread your writing not just spell check. Too long explaining scenieros .Repetitive and boring read. I did not finish the story.