All Comments on 'Monogamish - Oh Boy, Those Girls'

I hope you revisit Todd and Amy again in the future.

Something about this series just didn't do it for me the same way your others do.... probably its partly to do with my inherent hypocrisy of preferring male-centric harems, which indirectly condones male infidelity but not female...

[Thinking it through more fully, I think I could probably enjoy a good female centered harem (Beth's BDH from Alistaire was pretty good) but gay sex just doesn't do it for me like lesbian sex does, so the greater harem interactions would have to focus more on life and relationship than sex. Maybe an idea for a story challenge for you there. Come up with a compelling female centric harem with a good cast of guys that doesn't turn off those who don't do gay sex.]

I think the other thing is that I like how seriously the relationships between sexual partners are taken in some of your other stories, where the sex outside of Todd and Amy here was deliberately casual... my favourite stories from you are the ones that aren't just sexy fun times, but also have reasons why the sexual partners are getting together and working towards some sort of long-term meaningful relationship... even if its just staying friends (like in Acting).

Thanks for writing!

Consider the landing stuck! My favorite episode. Well done! 5 stars!

What an outstanding series. Hot as hell and very believable

entertaining, sometimes arousing,

i agree its not your best

but it seems premature

to place a cap on it yet,

seems like these two may

have more hijinks worth relating

As Highshine says, entertaining, but ultimately not as good as I've seen from you other times. As unlikely as your characters are, they are usually consistent and believable, but these two just... well, didn't quite click into the "I care about these guys" slot. You did hint at a threesome for Amy, so it seems you could throw another chapter on there if you wanted, but you've also hinted at a couple of "hall passes" that could have been expanded but weren't, so... basically it's a thing to do if _you_ feel like it.

Thank you again! To be honest, I thought the last episode took the mood down a little… even with plausibly ridiculous mode on I think it’s a bit ick to be getting together with friends of the kids. I know it’s a popular genre…. perhaps though for me it’s that the power relationships and tensions are not as interesting and are a bit whiffy when you’ve got nubile young things jumping on you as a father figure. But I did read to the end so…

I agree with Lambchop, the Amy threesome would be a good story. I enjoy your writing, so 5 stars, but this story line was not as good as your other work. But better than most other writers on this site. I am glad you are still sharing your stories. Thank you.

Great series! Great premise. Went at a plausible speed. Enjoyed it

A delightful and arousing fantasy; got and kept me hard to the end! A thoroughly enjoyable read!

Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed them all.

Great series. New fan! // Wolf

Great series. I read them all. All earned 5 stars.

Five stars all the way and amazingly well edited and proof-read. Only a couple of malaprops.

Truly great series! Loved all of it and could read more if it existed.