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All Comments on 'Monsoon on the Mountain'

by Jeanttesome

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
CUTE STORY

A nice short story, built up nicley and flowed well. Keep writing and expand your horizons.

Sultry81Sultry81almost 13 years ago
It works

The few spelling and grammatical errors were a minor bump in the road. This was a nice spin on a good story line. You did a good job creating a reason to get naked. I liked it.

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