All Comments on 'Monsoon Rains of Summer'

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Wildspur55Wildspur55over 4 years ago
Nice, very nice

Very nice story that is both romantic and sexually charged. Lust and love mixed together well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
How much is real?

You claim that this is a "mostly true" story. I'm wondering which parts were real, and which were made up. Here's MY story....

I married a lady born ten days after I was. Breasts like Allie's. She was my "first". We had fun in and out of bed for 14 years. Her health declined. Sex went away. She died just shy of our 23rd anniversary.

She's my guardian angel now. One reason I think so is that a year after my wife died, I met a stunning beauty 25 years younger than me. There was no way a lady that hot and sexy should have fallen for an old guy like me. But it happened. After a year of getting fucked, sucked, and titfucked by my girlfriend, the relationship ended. I know my guardian-angel wife sent me a girlfriend to heal my broken heart.

If this sounds farfetched, it's no more so than Allie and Dave being "spied on" by the ghosts of Cindy and George. Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Should be in romance, and believing a dead spouse guides you is common

A very nice story. This really should be in romance, not erotic coupling. While the couplings are certainly erotic enough, the focus is as much on the development of the relationship, as on the sex.

A survey I saw (iBritish) suggested that about a third of bereaved people reported seeing their loved ones after their death. After my father died I had extremely realistic dreams where he was talking to me and giving me advice. In the case where a former spouse is contemplating a new relationship, it is natural to hope that the former spouse would have approved. Hence dreaming conversations where they do. In my case I was concerned about decisions I had to make concerning my career, and I certainly hoped that my father would have approved of the decisions that I was making. I am not suggesting any supernatural involvement, just my subconscious, but it did seem very real.

ManumissionManumissionover 4 years ago
Simply perfect

Left me hopeful for my twilight years. Very romantic, very erotic. Thank you.

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I really enjoyed writing these stories and reading those from others, Many of my stories are related to my own experiences. My favorite that I wrote is "Slipping." It is, as I commented on it, about a young woman I met years ago who was married to a man, wounded severely in Vi...