All Comments on 'Monster Girl World Ch. 04'

I have to say that I liked this chapter. But you really need to work on your spelling and grammar usage. There's a lot of parts in your story that don't make sense. For one Yamadas father wanted him to find a bride but you put the word bridge instead. I don't think his father wanted him to build roadway constructions or to learn how to play a certain card game. There's places that word's should be put into different orders to make more sense. I'm not trying to be mean. I'm giving constructive criticism and advice. So please don't get mad at about this comment. I'm just trying to give you a push in the right direction.