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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Shame you wrote this as You. Best with 1st or 3rd person.

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Caught by her gaze, you kneel at her feet without realising it. Your mind and vision blur, unable to maintain conscious thought. Everything begins to fade, vanishing into a tingling bliss. You smile without thinking as the tingling turns to ecstasy, basking in the awe of th...