All Comments on 'Moonlight Temple: The Pursuer'

by Incognito_man

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I always enjoy a good adventure and you set this one up to be a real possibility. Well done and hope for more.

MarassoMarassoabout 2 years ago

That was very nice, but a bit too short. Left me wanting for more. But I hope you will continue the story and describe them traveling together. You created an interesting set up, which allows you to take the story in many directions. Personally, I would love to see them traveling, overcoming the obstacles and dangers and growing fond of each other in the process. Possibly maybe with at least affection between them? Nevertheless, keep up the good work.

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