All Comments on 'Moon's Shadow Ch. 01'

I was so worried we'd lost one of the best writers on here. welcome back!

Well this is a fascinating start. Very much looking forward to see what happens next!

@Anonymous Didn't go anywhere, just mostly wrote non-porn or projects that didnt get completed for a few months ^.^

@ZZChromosome Goin some specific places w this one, expectin 3-4 chapters.

Looking forward to more.

I read here at Lit for the unique story lines that sometimes occur and this looks like it might be a great one. Looking forward to more.

A bit of polishing on the grammar and vocabulary would be appreciated, too.

@44chicken: More is coming! Posting chapter 2 for approval soon

@Anonymous: Glad you like it! I am satisfied with my current editing process given the tools at my disposal, so I won't be changing anything, sorry if any errors bother you

Nope.