All Comments on 'More Than a Hookup Pt. 01'

I don't usually favor "bondage" in any form but I liked this, probably because it was not abusive, even in a consensual way. I strongly suggest better editing. In the beginning, you describe that she is "prone," which is face down, but it seems that she is "supine." Which is it? I look forward to part 2.

Admittedly, I was using prone to mean, 'lying flat' , I actually wasn't aware it could mean something that specific, haven't even heard of the word 'supine' before, so thank you for pointing that out. (Part two is somewhere in the ballpark of 60% finished and is already longer than this one, mostly due to character dialog)

Really great stuff