by subdued_passion
I think your driving times are a bit off. Also, people usually just drive from Philly to Ithaca or Syracuse.
I am fascinated with Literotica because of the relationship stories that I find written by ordinary people (Hey, I post to this site!) whether they involve sex or not. This story takes those complex relationships to a fine level and I am quite positive that this continuing series will prove a worthwhile read.
I'm glad some of you are enjoying the story, otherwise I would've felt like I wasted my time with the thing. :D
I realise the pace of the story isn't for everyone, after all two chapters in we still don't have any sex in a story posted on a site meant specifically for erotic literature. Fortunately not every one here writes like me and a simple search will yield stories that are more your cup of tea.
Happy reading everyone!
People who want you to rush through it don't take the time to appreciate good writing.
5*
Thanks for writing.
You really need to proof read. Hope the next chapter picks up a bit, these 2 just dragged.
Your characters and story are great! I like the way you are taking this storyline and am waiting anxiously for more!