by hoover789
I'm not into BDSM but I enjoy stories where women wear full fashioned stockings and garter belt. I also write a lot of stories that feature women pissing or men pissing on women.
Your story had some things in it I enjoy, so it was good reading.
A couple of awkward slips between first and third person, and a bit short, but otherwise enjoyable. It is an interesting mix of consensual and noncon. Looking forward to the valet!
Other than a few dialogue errors with regards to punctuation and paragraph formation, the content was great and the main character is super slutty, my favorite type of character to read and write about.
Morgan is perfectly conflicted, but always gives in to her need. I like that!!