by Glenda100
It started a bit abruptly, but it was a great story. It was just going nicely, when it ended - so I hope there will be more to come!
Nice start but needed to have some finality.
Thanks for writing.
Sexmate
Liked the story and waiting for what happens next. Another hot story would have been if the blowjob giver had been your son
Loved the story! I have dreamed of getting a BJ from my
daughter, too!
Instead him waling up to the daughter, it should have been his son for some hot bi m/m action.
This was really poor. Learn to spell at least, if you want to write.
I thought this started off well and had good voice,then abruptly hit a wall.