All Comments on 'Morning Milking at New Apartment'

by f8ckboi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Third person style doesn't help

It'd have been better in first person, with actual dialogue.

She could have asked if he liked it, did he want more, should she go slower or faster, was he ready to cum yet, what did he want, etc.

Nevertheless, I gave it 4 stars. Could have been 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No gold star for this one

Arousing story, but....not complete because of the reference to the key hanging between her breasts. The anticipation was that he would be caged after he came, but that didn't happen. Very disappointed with the lack of resolution.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
hawt

That was hot, very hot. He'd come harder if you added prostate massage, but you have to be into doing that. Again, that was hot. Keep up the good work.

f8ckboif8ckboiover 4 years agoAuthor
Part 2 of ?

The first story is called "You Rent Your Cock to New Roommate"

charmingcharles2896charmingcharles2896almost 3 years ago

I love how wholesome this is, just so nice, well done!

Dark_EquilibriumDark_Equilibriumover 1 year ago

It is certaainly not the usual femdom fare. 5 stars.

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