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Loved the story and the premise !!

and those not covered by the FCC. TK U MLJ LV NV

Damn! I should have been a Cameraman.

Enjoyed this, thanks

Great story with lots of sex unlike some you have to read six pages and only get one sex story.

Some of the dialog was off-the-charts unbelievable, like the dialog from some extremely bad porn film. For example: "I want to feel your big bare cock spilling your hot seed deep in my fertile married pussy." Seriously?

I also could have done without the nearly two full pages of "cream pie" (not my thing). I'm used to having to slog through small sections of "not my thing" stuff within stories on Literotica, but hell, there was nearly enough of it here to make it more properly placed in "Fetish". Perhaps a warning about this in the introduction would be appropriate?

-Rei

I enjoyed this story despite some of the overblown dialogue. But there is one major inconsistency. Kelly says her husband almost always uses a condom and doesn't come inside her, then almost immediately offers to let the narrator lick hubby's come out of her

I'm find with poon hound stories but tagging the married ones? Major loser with the inevitable ass whipping or murder in the future. One sure way to reduce your life expectancy is to screw with someone's spouse. A definite reality that can't be escaped. Major boner killer...

My idea of heaven. Thanks for the great read!

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