All Comments on 'Morning Prayers'

But okay I guess.

Prayer is a sacred conversation between a human and God. It is pure either seared soul or ignorance to degrade the act in naming it on a sex story.

The other comment stated they didn't know where you were going with this and I do not like where you took it, so you failed in what is no more than an interlude of thought which did not work.

There are vast subjects to deal with which do not result in a plea for God's attention as your story seams to be asking for in some catharsis you are working out as a poke at God.

God knows you. God created wonderful sex and blessed it and humans according to rules.

This site and writers can not handle that kind of depth, so it creates failures in stories and writers.

GB

Thanks for the thoughts so far. So far I offended one and confused another. I believe writing and storytelling can pose more questions than answers, and frankly, meander. As for the questions regarding the Divine...I do not know the absolute rules. As I consider the great gift God has giving us - passion, love, play, eroticism - I do wonder how to incorporate it mindfully and appropriately. So this little story was more of a rumination and playfulness on this topic. The last section is an example of the many facets of erotic play between lovers. No answers...just thoughts.

Thanks for the thoughts so far. So far I offended one and confused another. I believe writing and storytelling can pose more questions than answers, and frankly, meander. As for the questions regarding the Divine...I do not know the absolute rules. As I consider the great gift God has giving us - passion, love, play, eroticism - I do wonder how to incorporate it mindfully and appropriately. So this little story was more of a rumination and playfulness on this topic. The last section is an example of the many facets of erotic play between lovers. No answers...just thoughts.

Thanks for the thoughts so far. So far I offended one and confused another. I believe writing and storytelling can pose more questions than answers, and frankly, meander. As for the questions regarding the Divine...I do not know the absolute rules. As I consider the great gift God has giving us - passion, love, play, eroticism - I do wonder how to incorporate it mindfully and appropriately. So this little story was more of a rumination and playfulness on this topic. The last section is an example of the many facets of erotic play between lovers. No answers...just thoughts.

I am curious to see where you are going with it. I am however with you in thinking if there is a higher being, which I doubt, but if there is then I am sure all this talk that the church tells us about not enjoying sex and sex is a sin. Well I must be going to the pits of hell! If you are going to write a second chapter go ahead and do so and my church friend and I can find where you are going with this story.

Where is this supposed to be going?????

Consider taking writing classes if you are going to try again.