All Comments on 'Morning Sex'

by KandB50

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ptebadenptebadenalmost 5 years ago
Continue, please

This man deserves a good paddling, a good spanking and a good pegging

lesliejoneslesliejonesalmost 5 years ago
nicely done

I liked your presentation of the scene seen from your eyes and your wife's lovely dominance. I liked the story enough that I gave it top rating despite your obvious failure to proofread--there are many improper words which would have made it through spellcheck because they are words but they are the wrong ones here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hate, hate, hate second person stories.

'nuff said.

AloneTooLongAloneTooLongalmost 5 years ago
what Leslie Jones said

you need a proofreader

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Laughably bad

Difficult POV, horrible technical skills and with that little preparation she tears his sphincter muscle so badly he would have needed surgery to repair the damage. Of course that slut LJ would love this garbage.

No stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Editing desperately needed

The typos and missing words are simply too distracting. Moreover, the story does not appear to be finished.

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