All Comments on 'Mortal Fantasies'

I really liked your story, I hope you keep writing stories of a similar style. I will be watching for more stories.

Great story!!!

(if I had it) but I can understand wanting to be with the one you love. Of course, becoming mortal means that either may die unexpectedly, but the magic of love hopes that there will be a lot of time together before then. I do like HEA endings :-)

What a sweet story. I think many of us have the dream of the perfect immortal lover who knows our desires better than we, ourselves do. And the depth of his love to give up immortality for her! I loved it.

This is, by far, the best ever! Keep up the good work! (How the hell did you know that Nephus is my favorite? :DD)

I really liked the many realities, real life, the book, Olympus and the dream world. Also the lead not settling for Perry who would bore her to tears.

"Why, happily ever after, of course."

I think that your writing is a gift to us mere mortals from the Gods.

Another first class, top notch story. I'm a romantic at heart and love a happy ending. I think Nephus kept one of his powers. He still inspires your writing.