All Comments on 'Motel Pool'

by Jappio

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JlovesunderwaterJlovesunderwaterabout 8 years ago
Amazing

I love how you expose Mel in the story and how shy she is. It makes it so much better that her friend just went for what she wanted from Mel and exposed her. Love the story and keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome tale!

Perfectly told!

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