All Comments on 'Mother & Son Bonding Experience Ch. 01'

Why no pregnant Optison ??

Good start - continue story!

Cheating whore and a son more than happy to cuck his own father? 0 characters worth liking in this one.

Well done; good beginning; no backstory to speak of.

Very good.....Yes more please.

Very good start, intriguing possibilities....

Excellent debut. I loved the scene with the gag! Keep on writing please!

James should Cuck his dad and have him on clean up duty. As James and Elaine bring Sammy into their circle as she is now under Elaine's control, and Mike is the bottom feader

I always get a kick out of the admonishment from someone that, obviously searches literotica.com trying to find a good story from which converts might be found. Lost again. We all enjoyed this tale, the one that starts a chain of stories.

Interested in seeing where you take this but please post at least two pages at a time.

Too aggressive. A son should be sensual and loving towards his mother. A tender dom would be perfect. This isn’t your average dom/sub. There needs to be intimacy, passion, and love. The unconditional love between a mother and son.

He needs to eat her pussy until she loses control, pisses herself and he licks her piss soaked cunt then fucks it. (Water sports optional) A good son is pleasured by his mothers pleasure. He needs to worship her mommycunt. Let her suckle and nurse his cock often too. She should give him a loving throatfucking.

You’ve got potential here, but you started it too aggressively. No backstory or build up, just an easy stupid “sub” lady and her personality deprived son. Make us believe her sexual frustration. Make him crave his mother. You got this!

Great start, please continue, many possibilities.......

Oh yes, please continue - love the story!!!!!

Great don't stop want to read more

Loved it!

You show promise! Keep up the good work.

he ought to get her pregnant.

Great story. I'm not big on bondage though. I did like this one and would continue reading if there was more. I hope you carry one with it.

Great start I hope you continue the story. A little unexpected anal action or face fucking would be a great addition.

When are all the other parts coming

Very nice story but you quit too son it's too short please continue with more!!! Still gave it a 5 !!!

Did you know tha author ask80?? His works have been deleted here. Those were awesome too.