by MILowner
Cos you didn't call the fat dried up slutty cunt a "bitch" once in this story. I get so bored of the "suck it, bitch" bullshit.
You fuck your girlfriends mother and she asks you not to cum in her you do anyway? What a jerkoff.
37 is just about the time a woman who takes care of herself begins to enter her prime. If you mix in three years of undesired celibacy for her, a troubled marriage and a 20 year old,self confident bordering on cocky, male boarder with an eye for beauty ?
You don't need a biology degree to know nature is primed to take a very primal course . This author didn't take the suave and sophisticated path to reach his goal. He didn't need to. Enough said.
Very sexy story,everyone had a great juicy sexy time.Enjoyment for all is what matters when we have sex.Thanks for the story.
I hope to see more of him giving his girlfriends mother a lot of cock.
Thanks for the read.
Thanks for sharing. You had a 5 until the bastard would not pull out when she ask him to. That's just rude!!!!!!!
a story with a guy not pulling out when he is asked for. In some countries this is rape. If a husband would be bashed even slightly his commentary would be full of his usual hate.
I will use similar idea in my 6th story plan with such turn, that the divorce planed husband will use to do enemy relation between this daughter and his (ex)wife. Modern technic (video.............).
I ask for the more revenge story Authors not to use the mother in law fucking revenge idea for their next stories I want to ask patent for it.
I got such feedback, why I did peace in the last chapter with the exwife and the daughter. I could use this for a long lasting hate and anger building with never seen gradchildren for the exwife.
I would like to see the guy make Fiona pregnant, either in a follow-up to this story or otherwise in a story featuring her. Keep up the hot writing, in any case!
I published my Revenge Story version from the idea of this story on SOL. The title is "The Two Wimps".
it turned into a rude and inconsiderate relationship. but, I should have known what to expect from the author's user name MILowner. owner being the give away.
I cant disagree with rightbank but it is MILowner's story. It was enjoyble and looking forward to reading more.
I too was loving the story 'til he refused her request so it's a zero
It was great until he forced her to take his load in her pussy. Even a perv has limits.
Come on all you writer critics! It's a fucking fantasy site filled with fantasy stories!
People write these stories to get everyone and themselves horny. It amazes me how NOBODY found it wrong that he was fucking his girlfriends mom, just what a jerk he was when he shot his load in her! What a bunch of fucking hypocrites..
A mother in law is the mother of your wife NOT your girlfriend
This probably ist the worst structured story I came across here on this site. I worked myself through and might spare you some work. This ist the order in which these stories should be read and which should be anounced by the author himself on top of each story as he's not capabale or not willing to enumerate them in a sensible way:
01) Mother in Law Cannot Resist
02) Mother in Law Submits Again
03) Mother in Law Takes More
04) Fiona, Eager to Please
05) Mother in Law, More Like Whore
06) Fiona Willingly Becomes My Whore
07) Fiona's Work Life Changes
08) Fiona the Deal Facilitator
09) Fiona's Celebration Dinner
10) Fiona Gets Called In To School
11) Fiona Tells Her Story
12) Fiona It's Time Alan Knew
13) Alice Moves Back In
14) Alice's Blackmail Begins
15) Alice Accepts The Terms
16) Mum! You Whore
That's where I stopped as there's little new after the first chapters. Lots of repetitions. Nice to a certain extent, but way too little development for my taste. My advice: better don't read them all in a row.
I have read all of the Fiona/Alice stories in order now, and I am enthralled with Fiona. She has inspired me through many enjoyable wanks.
If you find the beginning slow, give it a chance, I suggest you invest the time to read the tales in order so you get the most enjoyment.
I’m going back to Deal Facilitator section now to assure nice dreams tonight
The whole story, which wasn’t otherwise poorly told, was ruined by unnecessary bigotry. Jap’s eye? So unnecessary. It turned what might have been a decent story into trash instantly.
Mother-in-law, ok. But the wife? For a mother in law, a daughter is needeed (mention of an underage one)?
You don't fill a pussy with cum after you've been asked NOT TO.......ASSHOLE
Not mother-in-law only girl friend's mother. Not married.
Generous average