All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law Gets Her Way Again'

loved this. could have gone longer, could have had mom/daughter fun

Would like one more chapter - you left some crumbs on the table and would like them explored. Why the sudden change in Heather's liking pussy juice (or at least not put off)? Are they going to have kids? Will Heather and Evelyn be intimate? You haven't fleshed out Heather's character up until now, so a lot of unknowns... 5*

But agree with the others. There has just got to be more to the story. Five for the first two, and five for any future adventures.

Jedd

His cock will get a workout

How about mom and daughter getting it on

A wonderful incestuous tale. Really got me hot and bothered a few times. lol. I have no doubt there is a lot more to come,,,,,surely daughter and mum must eventually have sex together as the relationship deepens as I am sure it will. Great piece of sexual literature. Thanks

Hope you have a chapter 3, wouldn't it be something both were knock-up but didn't know how to talk about it??

Great story. Really enjoyed it, thanks.

Very hot story, keep up the good work!

comment of a stranger, our hero would not be getting his dick wet from both mom and daughter.

Delightfully erotic tale. Well done. Don't know that I agree about a chapter three, though. MIL has gotten her way; what else could she want? To force anything would just be contrived. Sometimes, a theme comes to an end.

GeoD

I'd love ❤️ to have a threesome with my wife & her sister who looks like like Jennifer Aniston or her sister & her niece who looks like cameron diaz. That would be some sportsman double right there.

I don't know if you need a chapter three. Some of your readers may want it to see if Heather can handled Mom's constant sexual needs. Mom has or will fall in love with him, and thou daughter is right there may become the dominating female which may drive Heather to look elseware. With Heather being a nurse (right?) She probably knows all the tricks to avoid pregnancy, but really that may be the only option he has to keep peace between these women. Evelyn has either finished menopause or is close to starting it, so she may be safe though he has been blowing load after load in her like she was on the pill or something, but at her age isn't it dangerous for older women so she is probably not on anything. I suppose she could have an IUD implant, but it's never been mention. Details are important for some. Make sure your work is proofread for editing, spelling and grammar. Well done. Keep writing.

XYZ

(10/10/2022) I do love happily-ever-after endings. Great ending chapter for this short series. Five stars again.

Love this concept. Nice fantasy, well told story.