All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law May I Ch. 08'

Amber and Catherine will make great moms.

No, just no. The last half of the story just left me with a disgusting feeling. Obviously, you as the author, know more than the reader. But what you presented here did not paint Luke in a sympathetic light. I also dont understand Amber and Mackenzie. Lets not forget the police. So the police have no evidence that the women actually killed the father. Atleast there was no mentioning of it. They just found a woman, severely tortured and cataconic by the hands of Luke. And they let him go? Just like that? Because what? Do they nowadays release murderer because they already killed their intended target and wouldnt do it again? Even if, thats a big if, she did it, what Luke did was worse. He got a 'confession' after a long time of torture, take a look in the internet how 'accurate' those confessions are. But his reward for torturing that woman was his sister jacking him off? How fucked up is that shit?

Interesting twist. I look forward to see how Luke will fit into all of this. Seeing Catherine becoming a wanton slut is fun.

Normally I enjoy stories in which a young man impregnates his mother-in-law &/or his own mother. But I do not like where this one has gone lately. Why ruin a good story by adding a brother, a murder & police to the mix?

You lost me with this chapter

I don’t like this the chapter after page 2 I don’t like how you involved the Son in the incest and sex don’t like how he is written don’t like what he did to that women their needs to be a a tangible realistic reason and don’t like how he deflected blame because he never raped here even Thorne kidnapped her kept her captive and hired and let the guys rape and torture her and don’t like how it seems like you will just let him walk away with no consequences and punishment from the law or his family

Story is going down hill. Why bring the brother into the story. Useless tangent, that will take up writing time. Better not bring in the sister next. Will the brother be involved in more stories (hope not). Will he move with them (hope not).

The chapters sucks I’m going to try and not repeat what others have said but I agree with their reasoning who how bad this chapter is but how do we know she killed her husband why because the story said so we as the read and they as the characters have no reason or prove to believe she killed her husband and also no reason why they son did what he did no character or personality reasons and then he tries to play the sympathy I need help card when he’s the reason she and he are in the situation it’s best of you just recon this chapter and have it to where this chapter never happened because a pile of shit covered in gold is still shit and if you pick up where this left off that’s what I’ll be so just retcon this chapter and instead introduce the sister and have her get over her drug problem by staying with and gettin help from them and then she gets added to the harem but anything but this chapter is better

It was good. Until this chapter it become boring with unnecessary plot and character

I'm enjoying the story so far. Never had a sister so I don't know about lusting after her. I certainly did not lust after my mother but that's a story for another time. Now, my mother-in-law...

Keep up the good work.

The way Luke got presented in the story in a horrific situation is not exciting for this erotic story. As I mentioned in my previous comment I am interested to see brother and sister, that means McKenzie and Luke to have intercourse while the rest of the family gathered around them and watches.

I'm sorry, this was a good story until you brought Luke in.

I find this an excellent story overall, and find this chapter adds to that. Please keep writing!