All Comments on 'Mother Road Ch. 07 - Passing Lane'

life goes on and takes twists and turns along the road. This is without a doubt one of the best series on Lit. Leaving wondering where will out characters go next. Thanks for great character development and an engaging storyline.

Another great story in this series!

5

Still going strong, you do know how to write a great story.

Wonderful chapter I appreciate when my favorite authors decide to keep stories going using the characters we, the fans, have become acquainted. This chapter introduced enough loose threads to accommodate many future chapters of this engrossing family story. Looking forward to the next episode of the McFarland family saga.

Enjoy "Paradise" Mr. OldGuy! I must admit I miss it once in awhile!

Cheers

SAGE

very long and very good

Awesome chapter can’t wait for more.

Are Sonny and Christopher still in jail and still getting on like assholes, or has being in prison for so long made them turn into better persons? If not, will Walter arrange it that they both "get heart attacks" while in jail and die like the car "that noone saw who set it on fire"? Also what happened to Teresa, Christopher's current wife? Will we find out about this and more in the next chapter and when will we see chapter 8 coming out?

You need to finish the story!

Geeze, way to end on a cliff-hanger, lol. I feel bad for Josie =[ All around, loving this story, though!

When are you going to sell this on Amazon Kindle so I can buy it? I want the whole story, I'll pay eight bucks for a copy

Wow, NewOldGuy77, you had me in quite an upset condition with the initial NY bar/hotel scene.

My mind/heart was screaming NO FUCKIN way!! When Walter walked out of the bar with his big hand on “Destiny’s” ass and then Tom headed upstairs with “Angel.” As it was late, I shut down literotica and went to bed in a thoroughly foul mood…wondering how this cheating was going to mesh with the rest of the story line.

When I got up to pee in the wee hours of the morning, it finally dawned on me that maybe, just maybe, you were teasing us with a variation of the “Pickup” fantasy that some couples have where they innocently meet at a bar or club, pick each up, and then head somewhere to fuck themselves senseless.

When I started rereading the story this morning, I was initially thrown off by the blonde hair…thinking/hoping it may have been wigs. I was relieved a short time later to find out that the blonde hair only was a dye job.

All remained right in the Mother Road world…or at least between Tom and Laura as well as between Walter and Dottie.

Thanks again for sharing your wonder writing gifts. Definitely another 5*****!

What a cliffhanger? Moving on quickly.

This series started off well, but has gotten monotonous and boring as it went on.