by Nylon1
Not into the golden shower or drinking pee but . . .
Quite a good read. A few typos and tense blips that only distracted momentarily.
A bit more about jowls Mom gets Auntie to act like the set-up is not some taste is looking forward to, for junior's sake.
Great story can't wait for part 3!!! Love golden showers and piss drinking 😋. Rob is one lucky guy to suckle his auntie Sue piss and mother's too.
Try to write a story over 3 pages. It would make a lot of sense. Also get an editor and learn your and you're.
u hav gud talent for creating interesting scenarios in your story to drive up sex appeal.. it includes your parlor set up in aunty peeing story series and the public pissing and stuck over a gate while being spanked in this story.
plzz write another part with more creative set ups.. include more femdom and spanking elements..
public pissing is very interesting,, create a scenario where mom is forced to pee in front of other strangers
like on a road side or at small gathering of her fiends or co workers.. due to some shenanigans by the son. mom wud than later spank son for his wrongdoing and
include pissing humiliations and exposures and accidents for mom in future. these r planned and carried out by aunt in cahoots with the son. and than mom again attempts revenge. this dynamic of playful exposure and retaliatory punishment would be so hot and can take the story forward including many more chapters
thx for your effort
plzz take the story forward
i started enjoying gold about 40 yr s ag, and it s still a big part of my sex life now it s more squirting,between us ,it wunderlust,