by Nylon1
Hot and pervy just as I like them!. Well written too and I hope you submit more like this. 5stars!
That was one very hot story....loved it...can't wait to read it again...think i have found another favorite Author....thank you very much
This was a good story but you should have just left it in the present tense. As someone that lived the 70's they didn't have thongs, maybe the occasional G-string but they didn't have a gusset to suck on. Also shaved pussy was not a thing you saw even in porn. Other than setting issues and grammatical errors that a good proofreader could help with it was a good story.
More pages(4-5) and more teasing(good build up). Not a fan of domination. Please write a mom-son romantic Piss drinking story(Piss drinking in the last 2 pages).
Thanks
I enjoyed the story and the topic. But, as others said... No thongs back then. And, no one used the term "MILF" back then either. I do not mean to take away from the story, though. If you had not put the last paragraph in, it would have been awesome to see Part 2!
Loved this golden nectar story! Hope you do a second chapter. Would like to see his mommy invite a dozen girlfriend's over for a coffee social and after drinking several cups of coffee his mommy tells her son she needs to pee, so he lays down on the floor and mommy pulls her panties off and lifts her skirt up and squats over his face and tells her girlfriend's they can use her son to relieve their blatter's after she's done pissing in his mouth.
By the time they are all through pissing in her son's mouth he has consumed well never a gallon of delicious yummy piss 😋. Five stars.
That is incredibly hot. Drinking hot piss straight from the source makes this slut cum without being touched
One of the best watersports based stories I've read on here. Love the suckling aspect of it which although naughty makes it rather intimate and romantic. Glad you decided to continue the story