All Comments on 'Motherly Lust, The Book of Evil Ch. 02'

Oh, please let her be pregnant now!

First, a great, if unusual, start for your story! I do hope that you write more about "the thing" and give a bit more explication as to how and why they felt they had to comply with the book's demand to have sex every day at five o'clock for fifty days. Your characters, as you've developed them so far, would require a reason or reasons to even consider breaking the taboo at all, more than just finding a thing and a book that told them to do so. A flashback scene to develop that part of the story would be very good, soon.

Please keep writing! Your story so far is very promising!

Please! Continue!

nice!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story! 5 Stars! I'm so glad that James and his mom really did some hard quality fucking in a short period of time. Please continue. There is much fucking yet to be done, so don't have her get pregnant and change things.

Another amazing chapter!

where is chapter 1?

Chapter 1 reports "This work is not available"? Kind of abrupt starting with Chapter 2, what's up? 🤔🤨