All Comments on 'Mothership Wilderness Pt. 32'

I don't think the full chapter loaded into the site. It stops for me in the middle of one sentence after she slaps the milk out of the pastor's hand

It seems that the story is posted incomplete. It ends with :

"The milk is poisoned against us, Elijah." Truth heard a col

Pretty short chapter.

I think the chapter got accidentally cut off? There was only one page, and it stopped in the middle of a sentence. Please investigate. Thanks!

Thank you for your notes, I have requested that they upload the full chapter. In the meantime, the full chapter is available on Reddit: https://www.reddit.com/user/-RawlyRawls-

good chapter but a little short. Does anyone know the story of the pendant? If you know, can you tell me where I can read it in full or the author's name?

"The milk is poisoned against us, Elijah." Truth heard a col

That's how it ends when the person posting it doesn't do the barest minimum of due diligence.

I'm not surprised that this person can't take the three minutes it would take to review this pathetic effort. I usually don't read their stuff because I know it's not written well, but when I saw the comment about them ending it mid-sentence, I had to see for myself. And laugh a little.

I'm glad they made the effort to affirm my opinion that they'll never improve.

hmmm - as per the other comments - this seems incomplete...

Very short, not the typical sort of length and an incomplete final sentence...

Incomplete chapter?

Looks like an incomplete upload

Some of the criticism was inappropriately harsh. Maybe the reader was just frustrated by the truncated upload? The author has generally written at a high level, compared to most Lit writers, and the stories are quite engaging.

This person is a great writer. So the story got cut off, things happen. I'm sure it will be fixed soon.

The chapter is fixed now.

Thanks for fixing this chapter (although I got to read it on Reddit). Do we get a fresh instalment this week?

Sorry a bunch of idiots were complaining over a simple mistake. I haven’t read this story yet, but once it’s finished I will and I’ll probably give this 5 stars after that. Thanks for good stories and candy wait to read the new stuff when it’s completed.