All Comments on 'Motivation'

by BashfulHouseWife

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Beautifully Written Erotica

Nice plot, yet unusual. I wish they'd had those co-workout places when I was younger, but I can imagine -- with your help -- what I might have gotten into, or who.

Vivid word pictures without being overdone. I might be called overdone, with the passion you evoked. I mean it's hot, of course. LOL

buttcheeks777buttcheeks777about 12 years ago
What a workout

I loved this story, it brought parts of me out of hibernation and I now need a shower myself, a cold one. Very well-written and super hot. I could picture myself being that lucky guy lavishing all of that sexy attention on that sexy, wet, naked woman and being lavished upon by her. I hope there's a part 2?

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