by GriffonRyder
The character and world development was well written this is easily the best stories I’ve read, and i wish there was more content like this. Keep up the good work and I cannot wait to see more of this story (if you decide to continue the storyline) in the future.
You hit all the right notes for me, the characterization of Mo'tul and Jarva was great, and really added to the hotness when they finally came together. I would definitely read more from you!