All Comments on 'Mountain Getaway Pt. 01'

Overall, too short and abrupt for my taste but the writing and storyline look promising, certainly enough for me read the next chapter when it comes up.

I agree with Maonaigh that it is too short.

Shows potential. I will read the chapters as they are posted.

SB

Why such a hurry? You left so much out for example what was so special about the cabin you should have told us where we are and also more about the characters in the story. Okay, what was written was well done but you destroyed the story by rushing it.

This was the first two pages, I have some major editing to do.

I was testing the bath water so to speak.

Thanks to those with constructive comments.

Shows great promise for a story of two people who may have feelings for each other as a storm approaches out of the darkness.