by PoundingElaine
This is a whole lot like your other stories. Some of the lines are recognizable. And they're okay to read again as they're HOTHOTHOT!
But you've got to proofread better. Kneeding, instead of kneading or needing; shutter (to close) versus shudder (to shake) and more.
Your story is a cock-hardner. It's debauched. It's really, really sexy.
I'd LOVE to meet and meat Elaine. And I'll bet that I could make some progress with T too.