All Comments on 'Movie Night Live'

by 1Alwayswatching

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Movie night live at a hotel resort

My wife and i had a similar experience at a resort in cuba.... whilst we were watching the woman in the room opposite held up an a4 asking our room no, which we quickly scribbled on the back of a menue. She soon knocked at our door asking to borrow my wife. I watched the 3 of them for the rest of the night. He fucked my wife and his gfriend over and over and the other woman pleasured my wife too. My wife returned to me the following afternoon covered in his dry cum

LimeyracerLimeyracerover 4 years ago
JUST A QUICKIE, LUV...

Love the twist at the end... See, technology's not all it's cracked up to be... You thought you were invisible - now you know that Stacy's an exhibitionist...I'm sure you'll both now try and keep up with each other!

rabbit49679rabbit49679over 4 years ago
Would enjoy more Stacy/Becky stories

It seems Becky is game for more, and Stacy is a willing exibitionist, I am sure I am not the only one waiting for more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yum!

Amazing piece, especially for your first!

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 4 years ago
Short & sharp, good read

There is a bit of voyeurism in us all and your story gives us a quick sharp insight into the thrill of watching others. A very enjoyable first effort so keep up the good work.

Even more enjoyable would be to learn it was a true story!

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago

i love watching and showing off. this was amazing and so erotic. thank you.

Touch_typeTouch_typeover 4 years ago
Good start

Great first story and I'm pleased to see you're getting positive feedback (mine concentrated on pointing out spelling mistakes and grammatical errors). Be interesting to explore Stacy's motivation. Spur of the moment thing? Had she been watching them? Thought the oldies could do with a bit of spice in their lives? Being auditioned for a porno role? I think we should be told...

cutiegirl4004cutiegirl4004over 4 years ago
Well Done First Effort!

Nicely done!

zephyerzephyerover 4 years ago
Turned on

I really enjoyed it. Very well written and lot of details. Thanks.

1Alwayswatching1Alwayswatchingover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you all for such positive feedback, working on a follow up will get it up ASAP.

luedonluedonover 4 years ago
Intersting anal additions

Voyeurism can be fun, and I thought this was a quite well-written story about a couple having that voyeuristic fun and using it as a turn-on for their own sexual activities.

But I am interested in why authors (mostly male?) feel the need to include anal sex in their stories. Did it add anything positive to this one? I know no woman who really likes it, and I am told that the standard response to any man who suggests it is "after you".

Lue

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very good

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