All Comments on 'Mr. Billionaire Bachelor Ch. 02'

Excellent writing.

This seemed rushed. Also how much of a party girl is she?

A 3 way with someone you just met would give a guy pause when considering if a girl was long term material.

Still very nice story and I liked the main character. You wrote him well.

I didnt finish chapter one because a threesome with people you just met is anything but a romance. This on the other hand is more to my liking. I enjoyed your "American Count" series, and it is cool to see the characters again. I will be following this one as well. So what if it's unrealistic? I consider this a guilty pleasure, a "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous" in text form if you will.

It is good writing, an interesting plot.... but for my values, the women Damian came in contact with are cheap. I do not care for women who are so loose to not only fall in bed with a man just met, but to even initiate it. This type of woman, as noted, would not be faithful wives..... no, not so much....

Crossovers are bad on tv and also in literature. This story seems like an excuse to have a crossover to say you did it. Characters feel wooden. Fall in love in like an hour of total time spent together? Not a believable plot

Hope Damien gets a great prenup!!!