All Comments on 'Mr Ch. 03'

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DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 12 years ago

I love it but felt this chapter was a little rushed. I know you are probably saying damn if I do damn if I don't. Your story is awesome short but awesome. Don't cave to public pressure we are still going to be here regardless if it is short or long enjoying the journey.

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

I also enjoyed this story and I felt it was a bit rushed too. I hope you take your time feeling us with all of the gooey goodness before we get to the very explosive part of the story. thanks

MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyabout 12 years ago
....

Is this the end??

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