All Comments on 'Mr. Donovan and His Sitter Ch. 02'

by PrettieKittie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
At least SPELL CHECK!!HXPpUi

"I take that as my que to emerge from ..."

No such word as 'que'.

In this context it would be 'cue'!

Alternatively, in a different context, it could be PART of the word for a waiting line of people - 'queue'!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More please!

Excellent! More, soon, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Cheating is not romance!

emeraldeyedslutemeraldeyedslutalmost 5 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

Oh my goodness! You’ve written such a hot story that I didn’t really mind the typos as much as I normally would. I’m looking forward to see what happens next. I’ll definitely be sharing this story with some likeminded folks. Don’t let the anonymous trolls make you second guess yourself.

ivy_aguasivy_aguasalmost 5 years ago
Why Bitch Mode?

This part is so hot. It's so cliche to make the wife a bitch just so their relationship can be justified but I still like the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Beautiful ! Please continue !

Can't wait for next chapter ! :"(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
No way this belongs here

There's no romance here, only a teenager with a daddy crush and a married man about to abuse her. I feel sorry for his daughter. .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
@anon

No romance ? It's such a unique and well written story ..

If you can't appreciate such amazing writing , buzz off

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Perfect

Omgosh girl this was so incredibly written ughhhhh this is perfect. I'm rooting for a happy ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Speaks to me

This story is so relatable. You've perfectly captured both my fantasy and my marriage. Well done. I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Soooo good

More pleaseeeeeee

TinyKat3TinyKat3over 4 years ago
😍

More please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More!

Oh please continue this story! So hot!

cremecremeover 4 years ago
So fucking hot

I need more of this!!!

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