All Comments on 'Mr. Fuckability Ch. 04'

Im hooked....more please!!!

PLEASE post the entire rest of the story. I don't mind if the story is long. It's the long breaks in between submissions that kill me. There is a fine line between teasing and pushing someone to lose interest :) Judging my the quality of your writing, I know you understand the difference.

Thank you so much for the feedback. I do understand what you mean and I will try to post the remaining pieces more quickly. Chapter 5 required a few extra edits that took longer than I expected. I will take your advice to heart and I truly appreciate your patience and sticking with the story. This is my first story posted so I it has been a learning experience for me. Again, thanks for sticking with me through the lessons.

Your writing ripples and rolls like a rocking horse and sparkles like sun on a whiskey glass. Tell me your real name so I can find you tomorrow.