All Comments on 'Mr. Mushroom Traps His Dinner'

All in all, thanks for the intriguing images and the especially the delightful odors. After reading your other submission, I shall think of cloves the next time I am with my husband!

This was an interesting idea spoilt by the difficulty in understanding the switching in narrator; one minute its first person, then third. This is an easy mistake to make if you don't proof read. It was a fun idea though.

The line Happy as a fucked clam absolutely kills me every time I read it!