by Tastytress
I'm a brat and I can relate with the struggle to make your Daddy proud but at the same time literally having to bite your tongue because you really, really want to say something and then loosing the fight and getting your bratty mouth washed out with soap! I loved your story it was a nice balance of elements, please continue.
Pray continue.A delightful touching fairly light and sweet sence of the loving potential of bdsm.
Please continue...if life gets in the way, I'm willing to wait and will watch for the next "Brat" story even if it takes another year.
I thought these 2 small chapters were the set-up. of course I think it should go further. They need to come to grips with their Feelings and Attitudes. or Go on to the Next.