All Comments on 'Mr. Remotely'

"He suffers that I may be glorified", what a wonderful line. I absolutely love the way you told this story, occasionally "breaking the 4th wall" as film-makers would have it, yet keeping me focused on the object of your gaze.

I must admit I chucked at the "head shots" comment too, I congratulate you for combining gentle wit with visceral attention to detail. Even I as a straight male was enjoying the visual very much.

What a treat! Laura Burns #3. She (?) is the best.

But one thing: In a few places, you have "add" instead of "ad".

Hope you're working on #4.

Boing ! ! ! And again, and again.

I loved it. The idea of standing on a pedestal nude as dozens of women stare at and fondle my penis left me beyond turned on. I will be re-reading this many many times

I thoughly enjoyed reading this. Twice!

An excellent piece of writing, notwithstanding the errors already alluded to.

Thank you.