All Comments on 'Mrs. Cum Slut'

by CommanderBelpen

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not bad but who would want her to be their wife ?? Many moons ago about 20 friends with multiple rooms on a spring break spot had a extremely willing college grad hot Asian girl who wanted as much dick as they could supply for the long weekend. I happen to pop in that last day and wouldn’t fuck her if she was the last girl on the planet. Holes were beat and battered. Sad for the guy that married her as that probably wasn’t the first time she’s done that. What do they say guys multiply there partners by 3 to sound cool and girls divide by 3 to not sound as much a slut as they may have been known for. Some don’t care they love that there were ice has experience but most would to fuck them but marry the hood girl. To each their own

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fetishism

EZ8ltEZ8ltalmost 2 years ago

You tag it twice as fetish, yet you put it in LW. Dude...

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

erotic. Reminded me of the gangbang for my second wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Typical fetish put in LW. This idiot author isn't alone doing that. Almost 90% of garbage posted in LW belongs elsewhere. 1* Score won't bother these trash writers posting in LW. It's as if they enjoy the negative comments and low scores. Figure that one out. One would think if you spend time writing a story you would like a decent review for it. Not in LW.

CommanderBelpenCommanderBelpenalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Dude, sorry, I blame the medical cannabis.

WargamerWargameralmost 2 years ago

Wrong category

Scores 1/5

big9johnsonbig9johnsonalmost 2 years ago

Yes it is obvious this belongs in fetish. As for the story, very rushed. Jumped so fast in and out of each paragraph/point. Could have gone into deeper detail and expanding on it. You have a lot of works that are good but same theme feels rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story was great!!!! Keep it up and don’t listen to the other stupid ass comments. Everyone else is a jealous 28-year-old virgin fuckup that couldn’t recognize a good story if it were given to them in enema form

SemperSolus0198SemperSolus0198almost 2 years ago

If this is what your wife wants, make her dreams come true and let it happen. Then do yourself a favor and drop divorce papers on her chest and walk away from her. This kind of whore is only a half step away from having a train run on her with your permission or not, (if it hasn't already happened).

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Wife loves to be covered in cum

Nope, factually/statistically its the writer that wants that.

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