All Comments on 'Mrs. Lin and Her New Neighbor Ch. 02'

One page for goodness sake ..

nice second part but we need more please

More More More!!!!! starting to get hot! nice story line keep it going...........

Thank you for some good writing and a nice story line.But you have a sadistic streak in you . Please keep going.

you are in the right mode but more intensity. consumate.

Please keep weighting i need to see wh.at happens, and i like how you made the boy innocent keep that, and i like how you made her so sexually active, please hurry soon

Yes, your chapters are very short, but you are managing to slowly up the tension in a very believable way. Please do NOT stop. Quality is better than quantity (so to speak ... haha). More!

You've either got a short attention span or you don't know how to write a story. These "chapters" could easy be included in one good story of seduction.

As it is, it's rather spoilt.