by EmilyJames51
Another fantastic adventure! 5 starts for you Madam!
You have a great, simplistic style of writing that I love, you tell the tale at it's core and let us fill in the rest knowing how each character feels and will react... Bravo again and PLEASE continue... I insist!! lol
Without a doubt this story would appeal more to those in the U.K. more than in the U.S. It's all so proper and dignified, in a dirty little way. One part did catch my attention and that was when they were talking about their husband's dick size, "He's is much bigger than my Bruce used to be." The "used to be" seems rather odd way of putting it. Maybe saying "was" would make it sound more natural, unless it's a British thing?
Mrs. James, well done! A very nice insight into the backstory of the characters. I love where this one went, and am excited if the possibilities of where it could lead.
5* for sure!
M
If there is another chapter, it should be the ladies' turn to flush with John helping them.
Nice to see you back. And in form.
The perfect length but we all want to see what happens in the coming days.
I loved the humping and wanking. Well done Emily.
An exquisite piece of writing which had my heart constantly racing . The ability to keep the reader enthralled is a true gift .
Without doubt , the most talented writer on Literotica and may I take this opportunity to thank you .
Love the formal addresses and the submissive nature of John and Jen , two amazing characters . Five , stunning stars x
Welcome back! I missed you so much. I can't wait to find out where this story goes from here. There are so many exciting possibilities. Five stars from me.
Jon
Great Come Back, We missed you, The story is extremely enjoyable, Please continue this. We Deserve a lot more about Mrs Bell, Dominating Both of you..
I’m so happy that you are back again writing your delicious tales of the discrete sexual pleasures that are enjoyed by outwardly respectable English men and women. You have lost nothing of your ability to get the blood flowing to all the right places with exquisite consequences. The anticipation of the next instalment of this slice of naughty English life is extremely titillating. Xxxx
Just love the synario. It is imaginitve and leads you on to read more Exelent
I would like to thank you for the kind comments on my story.
It is very encouraging.
Emily
May be your best yet, pacing, storyline, are top shelf as usual. You have a gift, and my only complaint is that there aren’t enough stories for me to enjoy.
Laurence
Enjoyed this very much. A fun sexy tale. Perhaps another Mrs Bell story is forthcoming.
Another excellent story.. shorter but poised for the next instalment
Controlled and in control - can it get any better? Oh to find a Mrs Bell near me!
Every time I read this story I love it more, and it makes me miss your writings.
Exquisitely written. I simply adore the way you transport the reader into the world of prim and proper and make it so erotic.