All Comments on 'Mrs. Olson and Son's Teammate Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it. Five stars

I loved the story so far. I can’t wait to read more. I really enjoyed the plot and the fact that the son is oblivious. Hope it remains that way for a few more chapters.

I am a big fan of subtleties in erotica. Was her pussy hairy. Will Brandon offer to style it for her. Will he start making demands of how she should dress or how she should wear her hair. Etc. it would be cool if Shannon could get a tattoo for Brandon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
no sharing,mmf or something like that

like I said no sharing. Good story so far just dont bring other people

TeenStudforOlderWomenTeenStudforOlderWomenover 5 years ago
Great continuation of the story.

Part 2 of this story was just as great as Part 1. I loved it. Hopefully, Brandon (and soon Sean) get more sexual action with Shannon the hot MILF

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

Great story love the dynamics and relationship between these two characters and that sharing or blackmail May ruin it

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love the heat

I'm enjoying the heat of the relationship between Brandon and Mrs. Olson. There's something just hot about a middle age(almost) married woman who can't get enough. Kyle, though.....what a pill!! That kid is such a scold. He's probably the kind of kid who reminds the teacher to collect the homework.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Nice And Hot Short Story****

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Need to continue this hot story. Between Sean's observation and whomever saw the naked MILF and her teen lover in the window Mrs Olson is clearly scheduled for a runaway lacrosse train, with Sean leading Ian, Tyler, Nick, and whoever else needs a ride.

More More More!!!

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