All Comments on 'Mrs Peters: Suntan Lotion Fun'

Good premise.

But sex is much too fast. Both starting, and then continuing.

Needed a lot more teasing/foreplay.

Needed more details.

Three stars.

Should be a lot more to come!

Add a bit more detail, slow sensual build up!

Formulaic.

Don’t jump back and forth between “Jill” and “Mrs. Peters”. Distracting.

boring tag is the most accurate story tag I've seen used in years. Other than that, meh.

Nice story!

love it . fuck it.