All Comments on 'Ms. Laura Ch. 11'

The story is not over. please follow me (Trip Svenson) on Amazon Kindle. Ms. Laura (edited (somewhat)) is available there too, for free for kindle unlimited members, and will be the exclusive home of the sequel.

Good story. Writing was well paced and kept interesting with the mix of sexual and personal thoughts of the boy. My lower rating was due to spelling and editing. This may have been a translation from a different language. I would love to read more from this author hopefully with better editing.