All Comments on 'Ms. US Marshall'

For your first story, very well done. Nice paced.

TRY TO DO MORE ON THIS STORY IF YOU DON'T MINE, BUT I LIKE IT AND KEEP ON WRITING.

more on this one!!!

TERRIFIC story, & OFF the charts for a first effort!!

great story, great fast pace, and the characters are steamy!

Naughty, forbidden, hot, exciting, more please!

exciting....sexy...i was so turned on...I want more

Loved it!!! I want more please!!!!

Very hot begining! Please continue!

in the world, after these positive comments, would you leave this open ended and move on to another story? I mean this seriously, as an author, what is your reasoning?

Hey everyone I know I said I would continue with this story but I didn't anticipate that law school would be as hectic as it is. I am going to try to continue with the story soon. So part two might be coming out soon =)

Hope you can get back to this soon...

Hot, hot, hot!!!!

So good

Please continue this

i dnt mean to b rude but u need to add another part to this cuz it is to good to stp it wit jst a letter .... COME NOW

Where's part two noooooooooo

Very good for a start but too quick to and left me anticipating the next chapter.

Different scenario but too short. Not enough development of the characters but the descriptions of the sex scene is good.

But didn't need the 10 inch cock - very lazy.

Overall a good start and well worth developing further

Please continue this story