All Comments on 'Ms. US Marshall'

Please continue this story

Different scenario but too short. Not enough development of the characters but the descriptions of the sex scene is good.

But didn't need the 10 inch cock - very lazy.

Overall a good start and well worth developing further

Very good for a start but too quick to and left me anticipating the next chapter.

Where's part two noooooooooo

i dnt mean to b rude but u need to add another part to this cuz it is to good to stp it wit jst a letter .... COME NOW

Please continue this

So good

Hot, hot, hot!!!!

Hope you can get back to this soon...

Hey everyone I know I said I would continue with this story but I didn't anticipate that law school would be as hectic as it is. I am going to try to continue with the story soon. So part two might be coming out soon =)

in the world, after these positive comments, would you leave this open ended and move on to another story? I mean this seriously, as an author, what is your reasoning?

Very hot begining! Please continue!

Loved it!!! I want more please!!!!

exciting....sexy...i was so turned on...I want more

Naughty, forbidden, hot, exciting, more please!

great story, great fast pace, and the characters are steamy!

TERRIFIC story, & OFF the charts for a first effort!!

more on this one!!!

TRY TO DO MORE ON THIS STORY IF YOU DON'T MINE, BUT I LIKE IT AND KEEP ON WRITING.

For your first story, very well done. Nice paced.